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I can't keep my promise -2- by =Kyou-San:iconKyou-San:



WARNING! yaoi! (boy x boy) no likey, no watchey.

this is the continuation (?) of "Why..?"(huzzah!)
(blah blah) is comments from me ^^'

My yaoi story, chapter 2, I can't keep my promise.

Eric got even a darker shade of red, if that was possible.
"Umh... David... Why are you.. Licking me...?" Eric said quietly as another tear rolled down his face.
"Because I don't want you to cry..." David said, as he licked the tear away.
"Why...?"


David shock his head when he understood what he had just done.
He stared at Eric, who still was a little red, climed out of the lake, and he run.
Fast. Long. With just one thought; to get away.
He coulden't be gay.
He liked girls.
He liked boobies.
He liked... he liked... he stopped running.
"I like Eric..." he mumbeled as he sat down behind a rock, and started crying.
He could still taste the salt from Erics tears that he licked off. He remembered everything he had done-
"OH NO. I licked his lips." David thought as his eyes grew wider and he buried his face into the grass.
"I... like... him..." Comitting it helped a little, but he was still in a shock that he licked Erics lips. What did he think about when he did that!?!
He tried to remember...
He had thought about...
Erics hair and eyes...
He blushed.

After a while, Eric begun searching for David.
"Where can he be... He didn't run that far..."
Then he heard somthing behind a rock .        (OH YES!)
".... David...?"
David winced and looked up.
There, covered with leaves and the sunshine gently brushing his brown hair, stood Eric.
"Eric..." David blushed and tried to run away again.
Eric gripped Davids hand and said "Umh... Why don't you want me to cry David...?" Eric said and blushed. David freezed, and he turned his head to Eric.
"I... I..." David didn't know what to say.
Eric released Davids hand and looked down on the ground, blushing.
"You know David... I think... I like you..."
Eric turned around to go when he felt Davids hand in his.
"Eric... Please don't go..." David pulled Eric closer and hugged him tightly.
Eric was shocked, but laid his hands on Davids back to hug him even closer.
"Youre wet Eric..." David said in Erics ear.
Eric shivered when he felt Davids breath in his ear.
"Youre wet to David..." Eric stood on his toes to reach up to Davids chin, and he licked away the dried tears.
"Did you cry..? Please don't cry... Because if you cry, I will cry." Eric said, and a tear appeared in his eye.
David looked at him, and said; "The reason I dont want you to cry... Is... That I like you too..."
David licked away the tear track that was going all the way to Erics lips.
Just before David licked his lips, he stopped. "Eric, I like you alot."
David kissed Eric softly, and he knew that this was right.
Eric was shocked at first, but closed his eyes, and when they partned he said;
"I like you alot too David.."

The day after, when David went to school, he walked to Mike saying: "You know I promised to have a girlfriend to your halloween party?"
"Yeah, is anything wrong?"
"I can't keep my promise."
©2008-2009 =Kyou-San
:iconkyou-san:

Author's Comments

Pshaff.
This shall be updated right after my exams.
LOOK FORWARD TO IT.
>w<

[link] Part 3.

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:iconsenzayume:
ahh. that is sweeet. I like it, i do. And I really want to see it develop XD yay!
:iconkyou-san:
then i will write!!
i enjoy this story xD
nothing is planned, it just pops into my head O_O'

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"How do you call yourself?"
-Hercule Poirot.
:iconsenzayume:
that's exactly how I write -- enjoy your story too!!
:iconkyou-san:
weee~
i wrote more >_>''

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"How do you call yourself?"
-Hercule Poirot.
:iconsenzayume:
jeez, that's even better now. you're quite the fledgling pulp writer XDDD
:iconkyou-san:
i changed it again, cuz i didnt like how they kissed so fast >.>''

--
"How do you call yourself?"
-Hercule Poirot.
:iconkyou-san:
whats a fledgling pulp writer ? is it a good thing? >_>'

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"How do you call yourself?"
-Hercule Poirot.
:iconsenzayume:
depends. pulp is like... light fluff fictions and stuff.
:iconkyou-san:
i have a fluffy story xD
i think >_>'

i like the licking.
maybe its because i enjoy licking ppl too.
i dunno

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"How do you call yourself?"
-Hercule Poirot.

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